16. August 2014 · Comments Off on The State of Art to Come · Categories: Chapters From the Latest Book, Old West

So, now that Lone Star Sons – the first collection of adventures – is out to a selection of volunteer alpha readers and critics – who actually include a selection of junior readers of the age (more or less) that the book is intended for – my brother the professional graphics artist is wrestling with the cover. No, not the place-holder that I put up myself – but a genuiiine-original piece of cover art in the traditional Western pulp adventure artistic tradition. This is a bit new for both of us, since my previous book covers have largely been photographs, artfully filtered, edited and in the case of the last two, carefully edited together from wildly different sources. Frankly, I’m not Philippa Gregory – and I have a budget when it comes to book covers, and this kind of work-around has worked very nicely for previous books. But this one demands something a little more eye-catching.

My brother confesses that it has been twenty years since he generated an original sketch by hand; in the world of modern graphics artists, one apparently performs the magic with practically everything other than. So he is playing around, with his tools, and experimenting with skills that he hasn’t much used in a while. I tell him that it’s like riding a bicycle – you really don’t forget. Herewith, one of his preliminary studies:
Head Test - For Cover 8-15

It’s just a preliminary character study, of no particular character at all – but I am quite pleased.

11. August 2014 · Comments Off on Two White Comanches – Part 1 · Categories: Old West

As I have often noted before, the past is a vastly more complicated and more human place than the watered down history textbooks would have us believe. Yes, complicated and curious, and not nearly as bigoted as those who foment pop culture would think. Kipling might have been more right than he’s been given credit for in the late 20th century when he wrote, “…But there is neither East nor West, Border, nor Breed, nor Birth, When two strong men stand face to face, though they come from the ends of the earth!”
A pair of men from 1840s Texas – the time of the Republic of Texas illustrates this point obliquely, although I don’t have any evidence that they ever met face to face. They possibly might have – Texas was a small place then – and practically everyone knew each other.

Late in October of 1837, a Comanche war party descended on a small farm near modern-day Schulenburg, Texas, owned by a recent arrival in Texas, one James Lyons, who worked the farm with the aid of his wife, four sons, a married daughter and her husband. The youngest son was Warren, then about eleven or twelve years old. James Lyons and Warren were milking cows in the early morning when the Comanches came; the other family members hastily barred the windows and doors and escaped harm. But the raiders killed and scalped James, snatched Warren and half a dozen horses and vanished with the boy and livestock into the vast hunting grounds to the north and west. His mother never gave up hope for her son, although the other members of the family sorrowfully resigned themselves that he was gone – since all efforts at locating and ransoming him were unsuccessful.

Warren was spotted several times over the next ten years, first by another captive who was later ransomed – he was at least thirteen or fourteen by then, and had already made his preference plain. He was, she said, in and out of the camp where she was held – participating in raids, although probably not as a full-fledged warrior, but rather as an auxiliary, minding the horses. An Indian agent met with a camp of Yamparika Apache on the upper Washita in 1846, and tried to convince Warren to return with him. But Warren did not want to return, apparently believing that the rest of his family had also been killed. The next year, a party of surveyors working near present-day Mason encountered a band of Comanche whom they were certain were about to kill them all. But one of the warriors was Warren, who overheard the surveyors discussing their apprehensions and told them they weren’t in danger. They would be let go the next day. The surveyors – one of whom was an acquaintance of Warren Lyons’ mother – tried to convince him to come with them. Again – he refused to leave the Comanche. But the next year, a party of Comanche came to either Fredericksburg or to San Antonio to do some peaceful trading. The story varies in several sources. Since this occurred during the period of a truce brokered by John Meusebach on behalf of the German settlers in the Hill Country, the Fredericksburg version sounds likelier – but San Antonio was a larger and more cosmopolitan place, the economic hub of the region and not on the edge of the far frontier at the time. By coincidence, two neighbors of the Lyon family were there, recognized Warren, and approached him, pleading that he should return – at least, visit his mother. The third time was the charm, apparently – even though he claimed that he had two wives among the Comanche and did not wish to leave them. But the friend of his mother presented him with a pair of fine red blankets, and Warren gave each wife a blanket, telling them that he would return.
If he did, the stay was brief, for upon returning to the Lyons farmstead, Warren was overcome with emotion on seeing his mother again, although she did not at first recognize him. His family and the little community which had grown up nearby – now called Lyonville – welcomed him back, joyful and generous.

One of his older brothers convinced him to stay in the white world, by talking him into serving as a Ranger, in the contentious borderlands between Texas and Mexico. Doubtless this served two purposes by allowing him to fight another party than the Comanche who had lately been his comrades, and to provide a substitute for the free-roving and untrammeled life he had become accustomed to. Some time later, though, Warren was in a Ranger company led by Edward Burleson and did participate in a bitter skirmish against the Comanche, so hard-fought that the Rangers were certain they were about to be overrun. No, said Warren – who had been listening to the Comanche warriors shouting to each other – the Comanche were giving it up, and withdrawing. Relieved, the Rangers packed up their dead and wounded. Doubtless, having gotten this out of his system, Warren Lyons resigned from the Rangers, and settled down in Johnson County. He married one Lucy Boatwright in 1848, raised a family of children and prospered quietly, although he did retain certain eccentricities of behavior – as in preferring moccasins to boots when it came to a fight, during his Ranger service. Warren Lyons died at a relatively young age in 1870.

As for the second of the white Comanches – he was never a captive, but came along willingly …

To be Continued

08. August 2014 · Comments Off on Poppies · Categories: Random Book and Media Musings

Supposedly the red corn poppies that grow all over fields in Europe grow particularly well in soil that has been plowed, dug up, or otherwise extensively disturbed. There were many small fields around the outskirts of Zaragoza, and the little village of Garrapinillos where poppies grew, in some seasons and fields so thickly as to show nothing but red.

Most experts are certain that the association between WWI and blood-red field poppies was established because of the poem by John McCrae, which begins, “In Flanders fields, the poppies blow, between the crosses, row on row…” and which became almost immediately popular upon being first published in the second year of the war. Well before the end of the war, the visual of red poppies was inextricably bound to the notion of wartime service and sacrifice in Canada, Britain and the United States. At the end of the war, it was adopted by the American Legion as a symbol of remembrance, Frenchwomen sold silk poppies to raise money for war orphans, and the British Legion adopted the practice of wearing red poppies during the period leading up to Remembrance Day. To this day, the sale of artificial poppies benefits various programs to support veterans and active duty military in England, Canada and the United States.

This month marks the 100th anniversary of the beginning of that war, and one of the most eye-catching temporary memorials is an installation at the Tower of London, where the dry moat will be filled with 800,000 ceramic red poppies, spilling down from one of the outer tower windows – one poppy for every Commonwealth casualty over four bitter years of blood and sacrifice. There are only about an eighth of the total installed so far … but the pictures are riveting. The installation – called Blood Swept Lands and Seas of Red will be finished by Remembrance Day – November 11.

07. August 2014 · Comments Off on Finale – The Secret of San Saba · Categories: Chapters From the Latest Book

Lone Star Sons Logo - Cover(At long last, the final part of the Jim and Toby adventure – wherein Jim Reade and Toby Shaw make a long journey to an abandoned Spanish presidio, in search of a fortune in silver which may be buried within it’s walls. But their friend Albert Biddle has made an unsettling discovery – previous chapters of the story here, here, here and here.)

No matter that twilight had already fallen, the sun gone down behind purple clouds fringed with a nimbus of fading gold – that peculiar piece of news required investigation on the spot.
The Castle of Otranto has nothing on this place,” Albert Biddle observed, as unflappable as ever. “Buried treasure, dead monks … I expect to see a villainous nobleman at any moment … and if a pure and lovely maiden fond of wildflowers faints into my arms, I shall drop her at once.”
“You’d better,” Jim answered, twisting a mass of sage branches from the earth, winding them into a tight knot around a substantial stick of firewood to make a torch. He held it into the new fire until it was well alight. “You’re a happily married man, after all. Lead us to your dead monk, Albert. No wonder that the Comanche don’t want to set foot in this place.”
“They told many stories,” Toby nodded agreement. “None of which agreed with the others; powerful spirits, the ghosts of fierce warriors, lights floating across the ground … and Old Owl, he looked very solemn, as if he knew more than the others. He said it was a white man’s place, so what bad medicine that the others feared, would not harm you.”
“But aren’t you worried for yourself?” Albert Biddle ventured. Toby snorted, indignant at the very suggestion.
“My people are not wild Indians, like the Comanche,” he answered. “We are the True People; not to be frightened by tales told to bad children.”

“I thought that parts of this place looked as if someone had kept it in repair,” Jim remarked, some minutes later, when he and Toby had followed Albert Biddle to the inner room which must have been the presidio commander’s quarters and now was a tomb. They looked into it from the doorway … most remarkably, a doorway with a wooden door in it still. There was a fresh half-circular scoring on the dirt floor, where the door had been pushed open by Albert Biddle. “You didn’t move anything other than the door, did you?”
“No … I came in just far enough to see that the monk was dead,” Albert Biddle answered. “And that whoever he was, he’d been dead a long time.”
“But I doubt that he closed the door by himself,” Jim observed, holding up the torch. In the dark room, eldritch shadows and light flickered … all that was required to make a ghastly scene in one of Albert Biddle’s novels was a thunderstorm brewing overhead, Jim thought.
The room was a windowless one, as bare as a jail cell, although there was a space where a window once had been, now filled with stones roughly cemented in and the the roof over it being in good repair. A low bed, of unworked lengths of branch and rawhide held the body of the monk – or rather his bones, neatly laid with the bones of his hands crossed on the breast of the coarse brown wool robe and wound around with the beads of his rosary. The flesh of his face, hands and feet had desiccated to the same color as the rawhide, but there was no indication of a violent end that Jim could see … and he had seen many violent ends, in his time as one of Jack Hay’s stiletto men.
A plain wooden crucifix hung on one wall, a simple prie-dieux beneath it, of the same crude manufacture as the cot. There was only one other piece of furniture in the room; a small wooden chest, almost entirely covered – sides and corners by metal strap work, much blackened by tarnish – which sat against the wall close to the shallow fireplace, Jim raised his makeshift torch a little higher … yes, there was a dip in the floor, an arms-length from the fireplace. In the light of Jim’s fading torch, he could see the considering expression on Albert Biddle’s face – the expression of a man rapidly doing up long sums. Out in the pasture of the old parade ground one of the horses whinnied nervously – an unaccustomed noise in this silent place.
Jim’s eyes met those of Albert Biddle. “I wonder if the monk has not already saved us the trouble of digging up the treasure … that looks like a chest I would use to bury a fortune in silver.”
From the doorway, Toby said, “James … I think the horses are restless. There is something out there …”
“A wild-cat, likely,” Jim answered, as Albert Biddle gestured Jim to hold the torch closer to the chest. Toby’s eyes gleamed briefly; he had come no farther than the doorway, by which Jim guessed that for all of Toby’s brave words, he was shared the same superstitious of the Comanche regarding this place. With a whisper of his moccasins against the dirt, Toby was gone from the doorway, likely to see what had unsettled the horses.
“It has the arms of the king of Spain engraved on it, unless I am very much mistaken. But what would a simple Franciscan have to do with the lost silver of San Saba? And what brought him out here all alone?” Albert tested the latch of the chest – there were loops of iron where a lock would have been, and others through which chains might have once been drawn and triply-secured the contents. He lifted latch, and then lid, which opened with a metallic screech of protest, the two bent closer to see inside.
“It’s empty,” Jim exclaimed, crushing disappointment mixed with a certain degree of relief. He did not relish remaining here any longer, especially with the body of the mysterious Franciscan monk, hundreds of miles alone in the Comanche-haunted plains of the llano.
Albert Biddle reached in, feeling with wary care along the bottom of the chest. “Not quite,” he said, drawing out a small object held between thumb and finger. “There’s this – it was wedged in the corner. It might be silver – I’ll have to see it in good light to be certain.”
The object was about the size and shape of a sliver of apple cut from the core – thin at one edge, and about the thickness of Jim’s little finger on the outer. Jim took it from Albert, weighing it in his hand – it felt heavier than it looked, and he thought that he could feel something embossed into the blackened surface. “I hate to think that we came all this way and risked so much for just this,” he observed. He cast a disparaging eye on the body of the monk, whose empty eye-holes appeared to serenely contemplate the crucifix hanging on the wall. “I wonder if he found it – and if so, what he spent it all on?”
“Likely not what Bob Neighbors or any other Texian would have chosen,” Albert Biddle replied, and Jim was moved enough by that acid observation to laugh.
“Full to the brim with silver would have exhausted the capacity of …” Jim began to say, before the small metallic click of a pistol being cocked interrupted him – as loud as a shout in the silence, and suddenly the room was full of other men, and Bernard Vibart-Jones’s eyes glittering at them over the barrel.
“I most respectfully request that you hand over the silver, gentlemen,” the Englishman said, the smooth actor’s voice at odds with the expression of villainous satisfaction on his face.
“You!” Jim exclaimed; he had been so certain that they had ventured alone into the old fortress. He had not really expected the English agent to appear, risking the wrath of the Comanche, not with a band of bravos at his back, a solid phalanx of armed men, filling up the doorway
“Just like a bad counterfeit coin,” Albert Biddle remarked, conversationally as he handed the slip of tarnished silver to Vibart-Jones. “Just when you think you’ve seen the last of it, there it turns up again.”
“Keep a civil tongue in your head, Jonathan,” Vibart-Jones growled, the smoothness curdled into menace. “And give me the rest.”
“That’s all that was left,” Albert Biddle replied. “Look for yourself.”
“Insolence,” Vibart-Jones remarked, and swung the hand with the pistol in it – a blow on the side of Albert Buddle’s face which landed with a crunch snapped the Yankee’s head back. “I warned you about that, didn’t I, Jonathon?”
At that, Jim sprang forward, thrusting his sputtering torch towards the Englishman’s face; Vibart-Jones bellowed, falling back towards the doorway, and the room went pitch dark – a darkness broken by a violent scuffle in that part of it where Jim thought the doorway was, and vigorous curses in two languages. He was briefly torn – rush the doorway in all the confusion? But what of Albert Biddle, and where was Toby? Jim leapt towards the doorway – or where he thought it was, hoping to push past the human obstacles under cover of darkness, but two things happened almost at once: someone fired a shotgun, the flash of which nearly blinded him – and a heavy body plowed into his mid-section, knocking him flat, as shards of tile and wood fell from above. The ground rose up and smacked the back of his head, and a constellation of stars burst before his eyes. When he could see straight again, he lay with his arms bound tightly behind him, his legs tied as well, half-propped against a stone wall. He had no notion of how much time had passed, but it must have been more than a few minutes.
His head cleared – yes, that was Vibart-Jones, looming overhead, saying to the man at his side, “… them in here with the boy …guard on the door for tonight.”
The door shut, although he could see a dim glow – lamplight? – shining through the gaps between the planks. It was not as dark as all that, or else his eyes were becoming used to the darkness. From some distance, he could hear men’s voices, arguing vociferously; now and again the voice of the actor, but not the words being said.
That shotgun must have blasted a hole in the tiles above, for he could see a faint twinkle of starlight. He lay in the room with the skeletal monk – likely because it was the only one with a door solid enough to serve as a prison cell.
“Albert? You there?” He asked, tentatively, rewarded by a groan and a reply.
“Yes … damn him for a treacherous bloody-back bastard. I was certain that we’d thrown him off our trail in Bexar.”
“So did I,” Jim admitted. “I thought certain we were the only white men with the friendship of Mopechucope, and let down my guard. I even left my pistols with my saddle. Sorry, Albert.”
“Apologize when we get back to Bexar,” Albert Biddle answered. “I guess they’ve shut us in the commander’s parlor for now. I’m tied, hands and feet, so I guess that you are, too. Is Mr. Shaw with us? He’s awful quiet.”
“Like always,” Jim said, and raised his voice. “Toby – brother – are you here? He was going to see to the horses, he might have gotten away.”
A faint scuffling sound came from the other corner by way of reply, but it was not Toby’s voice which answered – but a boy speaking Spanish, and tremulous – as if he were scared out of his wits.
“He says that his name is Diego,” Albert Biddle said, softly – and the boy spoke again. He sounded very young, although it might have been from fear. “That he and his older brother were the servants of Fray Bernardo. That is the name of the monk, it seems. Fray Bernardo, of the missionary friars of St. Francis.”
“How did he come to be the servant of a holy friar?” Jim whispered. “I thought they were supposed to be vowed to poverty – and he does know this Fray Bernardo is dead … and where is this brother of his!”
Albert relayed Jim’s questions – but Jim understood Spanish well enough to make sense of the reply. The boy Diego had not been tied up as had Jim and Albert Biddle – only his hands were bound in front of him. He came, crawling on hands and knees, huddling against the wall next to where Albert Biddle lay, and as the moon rose outside, a little of that illumination seeped through the broken tiles.
Diego and his brother were the sons of a poor farmer in the borderlands; some years ago they had been taken captive by Comanche raiders … and Fray Bernardo had ransomed them.
“He was an old man, senor, even then … but a good man, a holy man. He ministered to los Indios … and they treated him as a holy man. He wandered everywhere, without fear … he had the power of healing, and he knew many languages.”
“How did he come here, to this place, Diego?” Jim asked, and the answer came haltingly, in fits and starts. Jim and Albert Biddle listened patiently – it was not as if they had anything else to do.
“He was often here, senor … he was a student in his youth of Padre Alonso, who died for the Faith when the mission of Santa Cruz was destroyed by the Comanche. Fray Bernardo came to say prayers for the souls of the departed, every year until his own death. And to take from the chest of silver treasure …”
“The Comanche allowed this?” Jim asked with considerable astonishment, just as Albert Biddle exclaimed, “So he did spend it … every single piece but one ingot … the cunning old …” Albert swallowed the last word, as Diego said, in deep reproof.
“Fray Bernardo was a very good man, senor – you should not say things like that about him. He may even be a saint, some day, I think. He took the silver coins, the cast ingots and he used them for good in little ways. A gift to a poor family, a little church … to an orphanage … but never so much that anyone would notice. Most often, he would send my brother or I, telling us to say that a rich man had made a gift to him. He was an old man when he died – two years ago. My brother and I did as he bid us … to say a prayer and leave him in this place, just as you see him now. There were only a handful of silver coins left in the chest. Fray Bernardo told us to take it as his gift to us for our faithful service. So we went home to our village. We said nothing to anyone about the silver – what Fray Bernardo had given us, or about that which he had given away! I swear to you, senor, not a word! But…”
“What happened, Diego – did someone threaten you? Someone who knew about Fray Bernardo, or the silver?”
“Yes, senor,” Diego replied, almost before the questions were out of Albert Biddle’s mouth. In the dark, Diego sounded very young, hardly older than little James Albert Toby. “These six men … with the foreigner, they came to our house. They broke in after dark … and they beat my brother to make us tell them about the silver. I think they knew about Fray Bernardo, but I don’t know how they could have known. And then … they killed my brother and made me go with them, so that I could show them where the silver was hidden. I said to them many times, even when they struck me and said that I lied … that it was all gone. Fray Bernardo had made good use of it, but they did not believe me. They are very angry now. I am afraid they will kill us.”
“There must have been some record left in Monclova,” Albert comforted the boy. “It was not your fault – anyone who knew of the silver left here, and also knew that your Fray Bernardo often traveled this way… it was a puzzle easily put together.”
“No, lad,” Jim said, at least as much to reassure Diego as himself. “I don’t think they will kill us. They might want to… but there is not another living man in this room with us, is there? My Indian brother – he came here with us, but I think he escaped in the confusion. So we have one ally at large. And … then, there is another Indian friend, watching from the hill above. That friend said that if we did not go out into the middle of the presidio after dawn tomorrow and every day and wave a red cloth, that he would go to his people for help. Diego – to you know of Old Owl, Mopechucope of the Penateka? He is our friend also. We came here by his leave and with his permission. I do not believe that our friends will allow us to be slaughtered out of hand. Tell him this, Albert.”
“So say us all,” Albert Biddle murmured. “Diego – your hands are tied in front of you?” He added what Jim had said in Spanish, and when Diego answered in the affirmative, Albert Biddle continued. “Well, I have a pen-knife in my front left waistcoat pocket. If you can find it and open it … well, then cut our bonds … softy, softly, lad – then at least we can sleep well, not bound up like beasts for the slaughter. When they come for us … whenever they do – hold the lengths of rope behind your back, as if still bound; we’ll catch them by surprise … I hope. Right, Diego – can you find my knife and open it? Good lad.”
There was a scuffling sound, as Diego fumbled with his bound hands to find Albert Biddle’s pen-knife. “I have it, senor!”
“Don’t drop it,” Albert Biddle admonished, as Jim asked, in tones of deliberately casual interest. “Ask him about those men who came with the foreigner and murdered his brother. Ask him about them, Albert. Does he have any sense of who they are and what they are after?”
“They are for the silver, senor!” Diego replied, instantly. “And peninsulares …of the upper class, senor – of Spain, or perhaps criollo… they are of the ruling class … else how could they behave as they did? There is no justice in the world for such as we, such as my brother! They murdered him, senors!”
“There will be justice, Diego – no fear for that.” Jim assured him, while Albert Biddle, his hands freed, leaned forward and sawed apart the ropes binding his legs.
“It sounds as if they are angry,” Albert Biddle observed. He fumbled with his knife in the darkness, and Jim felt the ropes around his wrists loosen and fall away.
“Can you make out what they are saying?” Jim asked, with a groan. His hands were numbed, and clumsy in unraveling the knots at his feet.
“It sounds as if they are arguing about searching, still.” Albert Biddle answered, after listening in silence for a long moment. The angry voices had grown louder as tempers rose. “Some of the men believe the chest we found is not the one – that the silver must still be hidden somewhere in this room, maybe elsewhere in the fortress. Others are certain the treasure is gone, and wish to leave at dawn, before the Comanche find them. It sounds as if they are divided evenly.”
“As long as they are in disagreement,” Jim pointed out. “The better for us.”
“Agreed,” Albert Biddle mused. “So – do we jump the first one of them who comes through that door?”
“If it looks like we can take them by surprise,” Jim agreed. “Still – I hope that Toby is lurking close and with a plan of his own.”
“It’s still three of us and Diego against seven of them,” Albert Biddle observed. He did not sound as if he relished those odds. “Ah, well – wait until morning, and we rush the door … unless there is a plan?”
“It will do for now.” Jim said, still hopeful that Toby was at liberty and close by.

* * *

As a plan, it might have worked – but for the short-barreled scattergun in the hands of Vibart-Jones. He might have been an actor – among other things – but he handled the weapon with the confidence of a master, as one of his co-conspirators unbarred the door and let it swing open. Daylight spilled into the room, dazzling eyes which had become accustomed to dimness.
“Come out, gentlemen,” Vibart-Jones invited them, suave and cordial as if it were a social occasion. “I see that you have freed yourself from the ropes … about what I would have expected from men of your skills and sagacity. A pointless exercise on the part of my friends, but they insisted. Their quaint native methods, you see – I thought best to indulge them.”
“So who has won the argument over the silver being still here or not?” Jim thought it best to take an aggressive tack, and Vibart-Jones smiled, mirthlessly.
“How kind of you to take an interest … Mr. Reade, is it? It will be of interest to you and your friend – you’ll be digging, of course – while my friends have a little chat with young Diego here.”
“You dare …” Albert Biddle hissed, through clenched teeth – sounding angrier than Jim had ever heard from him. Broad daylight hurt their eyes, but even blinking, Jim could see that Diego – now revealed in the light as a mestizo lad of twelve or thirteen years – was terrified. And no wonder. What had been the campfire that he had started the night before was blazing away – and there was no mistaking the purpose behind the ends of several ramrods resting their ends on the hottest coals. Albert Biddle saw it also – and he put an arm around Diego’s shoulders by way of comforting the boy.
“Of course I dare,” Vibart-Jones drawled, impatiently. “Just as you have done, gentlemen – for a fortune in silver coin and bullion? No, we are convinced that the old priest couldn’t possibly have given it all secretly. The boy knows where it is … and he shall tell us. If not now, then eventually.”
“No, he won’t,” Jim said, feeling suddenly very, very tired, or maybe it was just relief that turned his bones to jelly. “Because it’s gone. And there is one more thing.”
“And what is that, Mr. Reade?” Vibart-Jones managed to sound irritatingly confident. He made a commanding gesture towards the two of his comrades tending the fire. One of them jerked Diego roughly by the arm, pulling him away from Albert Biddle, just as Jim answered,
“The Comanche are here.”
He pointed at the hillside across the narrow river, now alive with horses, and the red blankets that the Comanche favored flashing in between the trees like a cardinal’s brilliant wings. The horsemen advanced down the slope, and the man holding Diego by a grip on the boy’s narrow shoulder let go with a shocked oath on his lips. The sudden naked terror on the faces of Vibart-Jones and his companions was almost enough to make him laugh, as they scattered like doves flushed from a thicket – snatching up saddles and weapons and flinging themselves on their horses – who of course had caught the contagion of fear and were not submitting readily to being bridled and saddled.
“Dios mio! El Comanche – a los caballos – ahora! Rapido!”
Now the Comanche were close enough that Jim could recognize individuals – Lions, old Mopechucope, and Bob Neighbors riding among them, his elbows out and his oversized coat flapping on him like a scarecrow’s. And there was Toby, as he preferred to be on foot, loping through the shallow river, swinging his old-fashioned war club and grinning from ear to ear.
“Brother!” Toby shouted, hurtling over a low-crumbled stretch of wall, even as Vibart Jones and the others gained their horses, departing in a rush of hoof-beats that pounded like a cavalry charge, out through the old gateway. Even as they did, the first Comanche warriors poured over the low outer walls, some on foot but others mounted, neck or nothing in their pursuit. It sounded as if the largest part of the Comanche warriors were in hot pursuit of the raiders from Mexico – much good it would do them, Jim thought; their horses were very fine, and they did have a bit of a head start. Toby laughed breathlessly as he came to where Albert and Jim stood by the still-blazing fire, and balanced the heavy club on his shoulder. “You survived the night, I see.”
“So did you,” Jim answered, and began to laugh, laugh so hard that he couldn’t speak. . Finally, Albert Biddle demanded,
“What in tarnation is so funny?”
Jim recovered himself with an effort. “This,” he gasped, “may be the very first time in the history books … that Texians are damned glad to see a Comanche war party, coming to the rescue!”

04. August 2014 · Comments Off on Lone Star Sons – The Secret of San Saba – Part 4 · Categories: Chapters From the Latest Book

Lone Star Sons Logo - Cover(Jim and Toby, with their old friend Albert Biddle are on a dangerous trek to the abandoned presidio of San Saba, in an attempt to recover a chest of silver, reported to have been hidden there by the last Spanish garrison, seventy years before. They fear that someone else may know of this treasure, and that they are being followed… previous installments here, here and here.)

A stealthy journey through the darkened streets – their horses’ hoofs and that of the pack mule muffled in strips of worn-out blanket – brought Jim and Albert Biddle to the edge of town. Even the moon had set, and the pale whitewashed walls of the last houses were ghostly in the distance behind them.
“Wait,” Jim breathed, at the first grove of thorn-bush they came to, on the rising land north of town towards the Salado. “Let us make certain that no one is following us.”
In the dark shadow of the thicket, they waited for some minutes, watching the star-silvered road over which they had passed. The crickets resumed their night-song as they waited, and an owl passed silently overhead, a pale shadow against the dark sky. Finally, Jim whispered,
“Looks like no one saw us go … we have a couple of hours before dawn. I don’t want to keep Toby and Bob Neighbors waiting.”
“How far to the meeting place?” Albert asked, and Jim answered, “Four days’ ride, three if we push the pace.”
“You know it, of course.” Albert nodded.
“Oh, yes,” Jim replied. “A steep hill above the trail, where the old Spanish trace to San Saba crosses the Guadalupe; Capn’ Hays and his boys had a set-to there with the Comanche, a few years ago – you can mine lead shot and arrowheads out of practically every tree around.”

Four days later, Jim and Albert Biddle forded the Guadalupe, splashing through the clear water, which chuckled over a bed of gravel, between stands of feather-leafed cypress trees. A thread of smoke rose into the sky from a low hillside on the far side.
“That must be Mr. Shaw and Mr. Neighbors,” Jim said, in sudden relief, and yes – that was Toby, standing at the edge of the steepest slope, signaling by a wave of his arm. When Jim and Albert Biddle reached the crest of the hill, it was to find a stranger waiting with Toby – a young white man, burned very dark by the sun, and with long light hair, hanging down his his shoulders. The stranger was dressed like a Comanche, in a Comanche leather kilt and red blanket toga lounging beside the campfire, smoking a pipe.
“His white name is Lions,” Toby said, by way of introduction. Jim kept his face noncommittal, but Albert Biddle raised a skeptical eyebrows. “He is of the Honey-Eater Comanche and sent by Mopechucope to guide us.”
“What has happened to Bob Neighbors?” Jim nodded briefly at Lions. No further formality seemed to be called for. “Didn’t Comanche life agree with him?”
“It did. Too much, I think. ” Toby replied, and Lions took the pipe from his mouth.
“Mopechucope liked him. He said he would make a good horse thief. So they went into Mexico to steal horses.”
“After the time he spent in Perote, I can see where Bob would relish such an expedition,” Jim answered, faintly appalled and both Toby and Lions grinned.
“I’d steal every horse in Mexico for my own vengeance. And half the mules,” Lions observed.
“This isn’t the time for private revenge,” Jim said. “We believe that we were being watched – Albert thinks someone in Mexico knows about the treasure. You explain about the Englishman,” he added in an aside to Albert Biddle.
“Were you followed here?” Toby asked, urgently, after Albert Biddle had enlarged on their departure from Bexar, and the presence of the English spy and his possible interest in the silver treasure of San Saba. Jim shook his head.
“I don’t think so … but if they know that we are going to San Saba, they don’t need to follow us. They need only go there and wait.”
“Not without the permission of Old Owl and the Penateka,” answered Lions, with a quick shake of the head. “The Place of Stone Walls is a place haunted by spirits … so say the old men. They would not go there, not without good cause … but if you wish to go to that place, I am not afraid to guide you.”

The broke camp the next morning; Jim, Toby, Lions and Albert Biddle, who had tried asking questions of the white Comanche; where he came from, what was his name, but all he would admit was that his white family were all dead, and he had been with the Comanche for twelve or thirteen winters. As Lions looked to be about Jim’s age, it meant he had been taken as a boy. Jim thought it likely that Lions could not or did not want to recall anything of the circumstances leading to his captivity. Perhaps Jack might recall – but that was not their errand for now. That trail led to the high, wind-swept levels between the Llano and San Saba rivers, beyond the oak woods and flower meadows of the limestone hills, a week’s journey and more – and into the lands that the Comanche held for themselves, held so closely that the Spanish – neither soldiers or missionaries – were never able to take and hold after more than a score of years trying.

They saw no other white men in that journey, and only a handful of wandering Indian hunters – whom Lions and Toby went to talk to, sometimes in that strange signing talk. None of the hunters seemed to have any unseemly interest in their errand – which relieved Jim profoundly. On a late afternoon, they came upon a low wooded ridge, which lay along a deep-flowing green watercourse. From the top of it, they could look down upon the crumbling grey stone square of the old presidio fortress, anchored at two corners by taller towers – one round, one square. The tall outer walls were paralleled by an inner wall, partitioned to make a range of rooms along each side – now mostly roofless. The blue shadows cast by the sun, sliding lower and lower in the west, stretched out across what had likely been the parade ground, but was now a meadow of waving grasses. It must have once looked to be an impregnable fortress, as sturdy as any castle in old Europe. No, such a place could never be taken by direct attack, not by undisciplined bands of wild Comanche, no matter how overwhelming the numbers. Constant sniping at supply trains, at foraging parties going for wood, or to tend the fields that provided food and fodder for animals … no, that would have worn down the discipline of an isolated garrison, especially with the nearest outpost being more than a week’s journey on horseback.
“I will camp here,” Lions remarked, abruptly. “I do not like … this place is one of bad spirits. But I will keep watch. Old Owl and his camp … they may come here, when they return from Mexico.”
“I hope so,” Jim answered. “Since they have Bob Neighbors with them; Cap’n Jack would like him back, his hair and all, since he is one of our trusty fellows.”
Lions sniffed, in a disparaging way, and answered, “If he has proved to be a good horse-thief, likely you will have him back. Either come to my camp every day, just after sunrise … or come out to the middle of that place and wave a red kerchief to me. Should you fail in that, I will go to Mopechucope for help.”

The three of them picked their way down the hill, and crossed the shallow green creek flowing sluggishly at the bottom. The crumbling walls rose above like a cliff – they followed the course around to that had once been a gate-house. If there had been wooden gates blocking the way into the presidio, they were long gone. The place was the abode of lizards and birds, and small scurrying mammals. Some names were crudely carved in the entrance-way – a souvenir of a visit a dozen years before by a party of bold men from Bexar led by James Bowie, but even those recent marks were worn by the passage of winds, dust and weather.
“I think we should set up camp in that corner,” Albert Biddle said, as they rode into the space defined by those crumbling walls. He gestured to the north-east angle, where it seemed that a range of building still boasted a scattering of the beams and roof-tiles which had once covered them. “It’s likely to be the most sheltered, anyway. According to Don Maximiliano’s cipher, the treasure was buried in a strongbox, beneath the floor of the room allocated to the captain of the presidio, an arms-length to the left of the fireplace. It was too heavy to bring with them, with entire security when the presidio was evacuated for the last time. Captain de Orca – he was the last commander of the place – he judged that such draft beasts as the garrison possessed should be better used to carry living Christian souls, rather than cold metal. From what was contained in Don Maximiliano’s little coffer … I think it was expected that a well-armed party would return when the danger was past and retrieve the treasure … but such was never essayed. Those who knew of the matter died, and the correspondence regarding it’s existence never forwarded to Monclava, or to Mexico City.”
“Looks like there is still a bit of a roof over it as well,” Jim agreed. “Our good fortune, should it rain. May as well set up camp there, and picket the animals out to graze.”
Sheltered within walls, the light breeze seemed to die away, leaving a breathless silence in the heart of the old fortress.
“How long do we remain here, James?” Toby asked, his expression most grave and Jim answered, “Not a moment longer than we must. You have a bad feeling about this place?”
“No,” Toby shook his head, in careful consideration. “There is an … an oddness about this place. I do not fear to remain, but I can see why Lions and the other Comanche do not like it.”
“We won’t have to put up with it for long,” Albert Biddle pointed out. “I know to within a foot or two where the strongbox of silver is buried, once I find the room that was the commander’s parlor-chamber. We dig it out, pack the mules, and head back to Bexar. A week, tops.”
In spite of Albert Biddle’s reassuring words, Jim’s feelings about the ruins matched with Toby’s – and he had never considered himself a man given to fancies and irrational fears. But something made the hair stand up on the back of his neck, and he halfway wished that they had decided to camp with Lions on the top of the ridge overlooking the old presidio.

The room which retained largest portion of roof was one of those which formed a block-house structure in the north-east corner, adjacent to the round tower. Toby and Jim set the animals loose to graze, while Albert Biddle took his notes and went to search out those rooms which had been the commander’s quarters before darkness fell entirely.
“James, I believe that someone else has been here,” Toby hunkered down on his heels beside the firewood that Jim had gathered. “Some time ago, as long ago as last year, perhaps. There are old droppings among the new grass. Mule, or horse … not wild – for what reason would mustangs have to come in here?”
“None at all that I can see,” Jim agreed. “And I was thinking just now … it almost looks as if this roof has been repaired in places and the floor swept clean … oh, some time ago, but not as long as a dozen years.”
“Then … do you think someone has found the treasure already, James?”
“I don’t know,” Jim busied himself with flint, steel and tinder. “It’ll be dark soon, and I’ll bet this place is alive with snakes and bats after sundown. If it turns out that someone has beaten us and the treasure is gone, we’ll be out of here so fast that we’ll make the fastest thoroughbred in the world look like a turtle …” he turned at the sound of a footstep outside – no only Albert Biddle. “Did you find the commander’s quarters, Albert?”
“I did,” Albert Biddle replied. “But there was a dead monk in it.”